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Jkrebs



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(Permalink) Posted: May 30 2016,10:11   
It's a start, but clown fish needs

1 -> Less succinct sentences, more contorted sentence structure, and definitely more adjectives

2 -> Comments in brackets

3 -> Quotes of previous things he's already said

4 -> Bolded phrases

5 -> Links to other threads at UD
  
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