Jim_Wynne
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| Quote (GaryGaulin @ Feb. 19 2015,20:09) | I will now go back to NOT working on a rewrite of the theory anymore. |
A perfect example of why your writing is so horrid. A sentence of fifteen words is easily reduced to seven without loss of meaning. If this proportion of excess baggage is projected onto your written "theory," one can see how it could be reduced to at most six or eight pages.
The problem with that kind of editing is that it will make the stupidity of the ideas more evident than it already is.
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Evolution is not about laws but about randomness on happanchance.--Robert Byers, at PT
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