stevestory
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| Quote (N.Wells @ Aug. 01 2014,21:49) | Now that is downright fascinating: you wrote about something other than your usual heap of nonsense, and it actually contained some decent, readable, comprehensible prose. There are some errors and some clunky and awkward parts, so there's room for improvement, but compared to your usual multiply mangled sentences you've got whole paragraphs that work decently from the get-go.
There's a lesson in there. |
When we imitate gary, we start with a small, comprehensible sentence, and then iteratively fuck it up harder and harder. Looks like maybe that's gary's process too. So when he just writes something once, it's fairly comprehensible.
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