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uh, oh.
QuiteID raises the subject of Kairos' writing style.
| Quote | | A general observation: When you take offense, as you often do, to somebody else’s characterization, your writing can be hard to follow. It tends to draw many threads of thought into a single whole, and I for one, who consider myself a careful reader, find myself somewhat at sea. |
and:
| Quote | | I am sure you have the best of intentions, kairosfocus, but your writing is so bristling with cross-references that it’s hard to read. Your “explicit” repudiation of the criminalization of homosexuality has to be dug out of your writing. The fact is that when you feel offended, as you often do, your writing becomes even more cross-referential than usual. I’m saying this as someone who is sympathetic to your perspective (though who has a different view vis-a-vis the state and its proper role in moral correction). |
Although KF is frothing at the mouth about San Antonio Rose, he, surprisingly, doesn't blow a gasket in response to Quite ID's gentle observations:
| Quote | | As for writing style, I admit to sometimes being convoluted, and will endeavour to try to reduce the incidence. Good day. GEM of TKI |
Lately he is starting every comment with "F/N." What does that mean? I hope it's not "Final Note," because he's thrown in about a dozen. I'm secretly hoping he will switch to starting every post with "FFS."
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